Taking the breath away!


You looked, you smiled,

You strode, I sighed.

The twinkle in your eyes,

The kindness in your soul,

No matter what others say,

I would give myself up for you – as a whole.

A glance, a nod,

The swag, I thought,

Could never go unnoticed,

‘Twas so sexy and hot.

You charmed, I eyed,

You knew, I smiled.


Graciously Yours!

P.S.: Reading this again, got my heart thudding! For none, in particular πŸ˜‰

Published by AditiChandak

Writing is the passion... Thoughts arise, words flow and the excitement never subsides!

27 thoughts on “Taking the breath away!

      1. Well, maybe that someone will come across my blog one fine day and voila! It’ll all change for the both of us…:P

        Okay, enough of wishful thinking πŸ˜‰

        I know they aren’t easy to find… But I know of someone like that, whom I address as my brother! Can you believe my luck?!


      2. Ahh! There lies the problem! I didn’t know he was so good, or else I would never have addressed him as “brother” in the first place… But some things which shouldn’t happen, just happen! But I know his girl will be really lucky πŸ˜‰


  1. Aah would have really regretted not reading this piece ! πŸ˜‰
    This was written quite passionately it seems. Loved it ! You charmed, I eyed; You knew I smiled. Says so much without saying much. A real masterpiece it is πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

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    1. You’re back! The blog missed you. Since you say passionately, I really don’t know whom it was directed to πŸ˜› But when I was done with it, it took my breath away! Hence, the name!

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